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Topic started: Tue, 8 Apr 2008 17:27
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vyurinov
Anonymous
Tue, 8 Apr 2008 17:27
Cool!
Munial
Anonymous
Tue, 8 Apr 2008 18:21
nice write up.
I could have done without the link to a guy DYING in a car accident though
James Ramsden
Anonymous
Tue, 8 Apr 2008 19:38
Don't worry, chaps. He didn't actually die. :)
Spinface
Joined 19 Jul 2006
211 comments
Wed, 9 Apr 2008 15:11
I agree. Nice write up James.

Tim set me to proofing yours and Pocket's pieces. I saw the combined length and feared for my sanity...

But you got me wanting to play instead of running home crying having read a billion thousand words on one game!
TimSpong
Joined 6 Nov 2006
1783 comments
Wed, 9 Apr 2008 15:24
Spinface wrote:
Tim set me to proofing yours and Pocket's pieces. I saw the combined length and feared for my sanity...


Just a clarification or two. [1] My decision to retain the link sent by James. [2] I initially edited and in some cases re-jigged both pieces. This means that any and all slicing and dicing; all mistakes of meaning or changes to content, all of these are my fault.

In short, Mark ensured that the final read was clean and tidy with apostrophes and colons nicely placed. I, as ever, am responsible for any inclusions or omissions from two good pieces of original writing.

Cheers

Tim

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